People today would argue that cinemas are becoming irrelevant due to new streaming services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individual argues that online streaming makes cinema wars. I am totally agree with this because the streaming services are easily available now and
low quality of movies.
Movie theatres are getting irrelevant as the streaming parts more easily instead of cinemas. We can watch any web series at any time we wish to see that at only one cost paid once for a month. In the case of cinemas the shows are scheduled and we can watch only one movie at a coast we paid. For example Netflix monthly subscription is equal to one movie ticket and many people spend ours of their day watching stream shows and repeat them. An online web series named money he is became very popular as it is available on Netflix services and it watched at night mostly.
The quality of movies showed in cinemas made this biggest change. The script of story is now that cinema shows only had a suspense for 3 hours whereas in streaming episode the suspense of story go longs and attract the people to watch them. They show episode in this way to make audience curious about what will happen next. Many teenagers watches the web series and analyse their stories. VFX or visuals are better than movies. For example, Bollywood movies are now a days becoming flop as they are only making Debut of old movies or dubbing south movies in Hindi and do not showing new story to the audience.
Movie theatres are becoming worse as streaming shows are more available and better in quality than the movies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...reaming makes cinema wars. I am totally agree with this because the streaming service...
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Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng services are easily available now and low quality of movies. Movie theatres...
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Line 4, column 481, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... An online web series named money he is became very popular as it is available on Netf...
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Line 6, column 341, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'watch'.
Suggestion: watch
...t what will happen next. Many teenagers watches the web series and analyse their storie...
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Line 6, column 464, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...vies. For example, Bollywood movies are now a days becoming flop as they are only making D...
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Line 6, column 468, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
.... For example, Bollywood movies are now a days becoming flop as they are only making D...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e. Movie theatres are becoming worse as streaming shows are more available and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63878326996 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19386033628 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54752851711 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8052242554 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1428571429 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149702190962 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553237928366 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423251227053 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868261835815 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624773898002 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.