The natural resources such as oil, forests and freshwater are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?
Solving the exhaustion of natural resources is one of the top priorities among countries around the world. In fact, these days, those categories of natural resources, including oil, dense forests, and freshwater are being exploited excessively without strict protection and recovery, which has raised numerous consequences globally. There are several reasons contributing to this problem, and this essay will shed light on some possible causes, as well as potential long-term solutions to address these issues.
One major effect behind the rising overwhelming consuming limited resources is that this trend would definitely lead to the insufficiency of basic amenities for both medical health and daily activities, even having a detrimental impact on the whole economy. Obviously, humans lay a dependence much more on natural resources on a daily basis. To give an example, water plays an indispensable role in not only speeding up body metabolism but also serving manufacturing purposes. Therefore, humans cannot live without basic necessities if not citizens have to suffer from many diseases and health issues related to this matter such as sanction or asthma in certain regions in the world. Furthermore, in order to survive and grow, people have to live in harmony with other species. If humans continue to over-explode forests for economic benefits and ignore the worst results, it would absolutely bring thousands of species to the brink of extinction. As a result, people cannot survive because of imbalancing the biodiversity.
Actions should be taken into consideration as soon as possible to minimize the negative impacts on the environment. First and foremost, the government should share the burden by cooperating in many aspects, including stimulating the circular economy globally. This idea might help companies to make use of recycled materials as one of the sources of growth, and thriving in the way of sustainable development. Although this approach may face various challenges at first transformation, it would generate more benefits and reduce the manufacturing cost. Today, there are several corporations following this method such as Nestle and Unilever with typical products thanks to the support of the government. In addition, both non-organisations and organisations should launch a campaign through viral videos containing green messages or utilize vivid infographics on social media platforms. This way will raise public awareness and encourage to use eco-friendly products as a substitution for plastic goods.
In conclusion, natural resources are being consumed at an alarming rate would lead to enormous consequences in terms of health issues, other activities as well as biodiversity on a large scale. However, by joining hands, authorities, and residents can tackle those issues by following the step of the circular economy and using organic products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
.... Therefore, humans cannot live without basic necessities if not citizens have to suffer from man...
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Line 3, column 961, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to the brink of extinction. As a result, people cannot survive because of imbalan...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...essages or utilize vivid infographics on social media platforms. This way will ra...
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Line 5, column 940, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
...ll raise public awareness and encourage to use eco-friendly products as a substitution...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2460.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 439.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60364464692 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06181186753 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 176.041082164 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612756264237 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 775.8 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0850000522 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.473684211 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1052631579 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05263157895 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182028280126 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432445736421 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525567855174 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113130699833 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649009213169 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 78.4519038076 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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