People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
Nowadays people suffer from there sleeping habits and how it is different from the past. This essay will discuss the cause of this sleeping problems and the effects on people having trouble in there sleeping hours.
From my point of view, There are many reasons of this sleeping disorder. One of them are the stress people are facing in their life or their daily routine these days. That leads them to sleep a fewer hours to what they were used to. Meanwhile, People thinking about their future can cause this kind of sleeping problems or sleeping for less hours than usual. As an example, scientists have done some researches to know what are the cause of this sleeping disorder and what is the difference between the past few years and now and they found that people face the problem which is thinking about their future.
Some of the effects of these problem on the person himself are some kind of depression that can lead of having some mental issues and in certain situations to a problem called insomnia. also, One of the effects is affecting the person’s mood that can cause some problems in his relation between his relatives or his work colleges. Meanwhile, less productivity in his work field due to his mood or his mental issues caused by the less sleeping hours and that can lead to a disaster. As an example, in 2015 a plane crashed in a building because the main pilot was having a trouble to sleep in the past six months he was to dizzy and he fainted while flying in the air and that caused to many lives.
To sum up. There are many causes as people facing stress and the effects are depression and relation problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, as to, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22900994913 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455782312925 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3076923077 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305683167702 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119654772346 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873279572466 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198052365266 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125672204135 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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