Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence,while others think intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What’s your opinion?
Some people believe that intelligence is best measured by success, while others hold the opinion that intelligence might be measured in other ways. This essay agrees with that intelligence can be measures by other ways and not only success as that not all successful people are clever and not all smart people want to be successful. This essay will discuss some of the different ways to measure intelligence and then it will discuss why not to take the success as the best measure for intelligence.
In today’s world there are various techniques and methods that can be used to measure the level of intelligence more accurately. One common method is through intelligence tests such as IQ tests and other tests to know the person’s abilities in several things like problem solving skills and creativity. In addition, another way is behavioral observation to observe the way of interaction and decision making.
Intelligence can’t be measured based on the one's success as that this method is inaccurate as it differs from one to another. First of all, smart individuals may prioritize life aspects as that they seek for self-fulfillment and may make great efforts to reach the social life they want and don’t care about being successful. Moreover, being successful depends more on being a hard worker to reach goals and not to be smart so because of that not all successful people are intelligent and clever.
In a nutshell, one of the ways to measure intellect is success, but in my opinion, I think that intelligence and cleverness could not be measured by success, as there are much more important that can be considered to measure intelligence of people which are without errors.
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, i think, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0275862069 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86716621296 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506896551724 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4058820349 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.545454545 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.561225941386 0.244688304435 229% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219802692665 0.084324248473 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178631575084 0.0667982634062 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284384847118 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205676835973 0.056905535591 361% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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