Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio and newspaper have become the essential part of our lives. What is your opinion?
These days, there is an ongoing debate about the mass media including TV, newspaper and radio have become an important role in people lives. While it is possible to claim that newspapers, mass media and radio update us what is going on in this world. My view is that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument.
There are several reasons why newspapers, media and radio are considered to be advantages to us. One of them is that reading daily newspaper will give information about every corner of the world including the sports, movies etc and motivates us to achieve something. Media gives us live information, and current events, inventions, wars etc. It can also be argued that we tend to waste hours by watching television instead of working on our goals.
In my personal view, students who are poor in reading and writing the assessments, I highly recommend them to spend time on reading daily newspaper at least one hour can improve their English fluency, grammar and vocabulary rather wasting time in watching useless TV shows. Most of the time listening to radio helps when you are driving, it entertains us and sometimes gives useful stuff about traffic updates.
To conclude, the mass media including TV, newspaper and radio play a vital role our life, it will very helpful when they are used in proper way and it will mislead or waste our time when it is misused.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o achieve something. Media gives us live information, and current events, inventi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'at least']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242857142857 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.203571428571 0.155533422707 131% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0642857142857 0.0946595960268 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0214285714286 0.0501214627716 43% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0892857142857 0.0437548338989 204% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0964285714286 0.122226691241 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0714285714286 0.0403226058552 177% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54656519604 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0285714285714 0.0326793684256 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0607142857143 0.0861772015684 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0214285714286 0.021408717616 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0214285714286 0.011925033212 180% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1472.0 1933.35771543 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 316.048096192 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81818181818 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.304347826087 0.374742101984 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241106719368 0.28420135186 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154150197628 0.203846283523 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114624505929 0.137316102897 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54656519604 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584980237154 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 59.8290525933 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.7743622355 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9893930018 49.517814964 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.818181818 127.492653851 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7743622355 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.814263465372 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 47.1106719368 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.30681818182 1.69124875643 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372662883703 0.332605444948 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113316185234 0.102741220458 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0708152734944 0.0668466124924 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.573465003716 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.172247847731 0.148594505496 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158849855831 0.134430193775 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922789231323 0.0742795772207 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.273194845368 0.324371583561 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0199539211695 0.0638462369009 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247856548592 0.228012699653 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967949813495 0.058150111329 166% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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