Some people prefer to spend holidays in resorts where everything is organized for them and they take little interest in the country they are visiting. Others prefer to travel around the country and to see how the people live, to get to know their customs and traditions and cuisine.
Write an essay on which type of foreign travel you think is best for both the tourist and the local community.
It is argued that traveling around a country is more interesting than spending the whole vacation in resorts where everything is available because travelers can learn more about the way people live, as well as their customs, traditions and local foods. I completely agree with this idea.
On the one hand, by going to different cities in a country, explorers can experience a number of aspects of life. First, visiting many tourist attractions or historical places increase knowledge of a person in many positive ways. Second, by travelling around, they can enjoy a variety of local specialties which are difficult to find in a restaurant as this cuisine is specific for that region only and hardly reproduce somewhere else. This cannot be learnt by spending whole time in hotels.
On the other hand, travelling around the country not only benefits the tourists but also the local community such as increasing income, creating more job for local people and some other benefits. By travelling around, commuters spend a remarkable amount of money on transportation which contributes to the local economy. In addition, residents have more job to do in such tourist attractions and historical places so that unemployment rate decreases. This is one of the ways to improve that country.
In conclusion, travelling around the nation is not only beneficial to the inhabitants but also to the travelers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19823788546 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87535978965 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590308370044 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3414426856 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.272727273 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210250058369 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633163483495 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815406569228 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124159286399 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692542941253 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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