Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is sometimes argued that living in a private house is better than in a block of flat. I strongly agree with this idea for many reasons.
There are many reasons while people think that that the youth are living in the apartment is the best choice. Firstly, the vertical cities are high strength security. If anyone wants to enter here people have to show the identified card and always motored by cameras everywhere. Secondly, the condominium will help the government increase land for public usage. The Ho Chi Minh authorities improve the transportation systems by extending the main road through the city and developing various new means of transports which help urban citizens easily travel inside. Furthermore, some parks will be created which give children place to play games or visit.
However, I concerned that to live in a horizontal city has many advantages. The initial benefit is that I do not pay any fee for parking or building. For instance, when the Vietnamese citizens live in chambers where they have to pay a part of the salary for parking and security. Another advantage of this private place is wide individual space to illustrate that the civilian could build a garden in the yard and plant various kind of vegetables that good for mental health, it also creates the green space in the city.
In conclusion, although some people are disagreed to own a house, I strongly believe that this is a golden chance for enjoying the life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.859437751 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58476716047 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622489959839 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4610403961 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0769230769 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173978962578 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617324475196 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748178497078 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848027627134 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572646823421 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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