Online shopping is destroying local businesses.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping with regards to this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Some people believe that purchasing on the internet is deteriorating the local enterprise. It is probably due to reasons such as quality of product and prolonged delivery time. Nonetheless, benefits of this method is convenience and having discounts.
To begin with, technological advancements has led to a fast-paced environment. In line with this, buying of goods today can be done just on the click of the mouse. Websites offering wonderful products can be at hand but sometimes compromises standards. Product quality of items purchased online is uncertain because consumers cannot test and evaluate it physically unlike in local markets. Conversely, the packed goods were meant to be sent first to a courier for several days before arriving to one’s home while on neighboring stores its availability is on the spot. To illustrate, electronic equipment bought from an international seller is usually delivered after a month.
On the other note, the advantages of purchasing on the internet can be an awesome experience for many. The convenience it takes to people that they could easily buy the product that they want in just few minutes and the variety of similar items to choose from. Moreover, the prices can sometimes be lowered or in sale in some occasions that individuals can be able to save money. For example, amazon.com is one popular shopping sites that offer tremendous goods such as gadgets, appliances and plenty of others which daily provides a discounted price.
Be that as it may, there exist both negative and positive sides of shopping in the platform of the internet. It can be said to be in low quality but still an easy way to purchase one’s desired product. Indeed, it will all depends upon the person who will either prefer physical or virtual means of marketing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, while, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12162162162 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88071691578 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 139.433497537 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2720370445 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0950078749962 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319673555543 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270135157937 0.071462118173 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554144298936 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225397101392 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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