The information revolution has changed the ways of mass communication and had some negative and positive effects on individuals’ lives as well as on society. To what extent you are agreed or disagree?
With the advancement of modern technology, ways to share the information has drastically changed. This has affected the ways of mass communication as the technology such as smartphones and smart devices has not only connected many people but made information sharing easy. This sharing of information among mass group both implies negative and positive effect. We will further discuss these effects briefly.
Firstly, nowadays in this era of information revolution, sometimes it is difficult to interpret the information that we received are genuine or not. For example, some news on social networking site may get viral that causes a false notion of understanding the information from individual's perspective thus it gives rise to the misunderstanding of information. Such instance of sharing of the information from social media as a medium, where a huge population of people can be affected with falsified information shows clearly the negative effect because of the information revolutions that we witnessed today.
Secondly, this revolution in the field of information sharing has brought perks in several ways. For example, the invention of smart device and smartphones that help us serve by giving the information related to our choice with just a click away, also the portability of such technology helps us to access the information wherever and whenever we want. Thus, not only a mass number of people but from individual's perspective it showed positive effects from this revolution of information.
To recapitulate, according to the preceding discussion, I am inclined to the opinion that revolution of technology has not only changed the ways of mass communication but also brought negative and positive effect on once individual life.
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- The information revolution has changed the ways of mass communication and had some negative and positive effects on individuals’ lives as well as on society. To what extent you are agreed or disagree? 77
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 5.75862068966 417% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45955882353 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16114691297 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533088235294 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1836697877 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264673050589 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112865758515 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679973791602 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186919344271 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522347792714 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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