Claim: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own.
Reason: Disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The statement consists of two claims. First, the statement claims that learning will be more effective from a person having similar views with us.Second, there is very hard to learn from a person, who shares the different idea with us. I strongly agree with both of the statement. Learning will be effective from the person who shares common ideas with us because, it helps to make communication better, give incentive, and reduce stress.
There will be good a communication if we have got a chance to learn from the person having similar interest. For example,the lab technician will learn from the person whose views are positive with the chemical. If somebody thinks that the chemicals are invented just for the destruction, then, in this case, the lab technician will not learn effectively from such unbeknownst types of the person. Similarly, the public orator likely to learn little from the reclusive type person about how to improve a public speech.
Learning means improving behavior in positive the way. Similarly, In school, if our goal and objectives are to achieve something positive. The Teachers motivation guides us to achieve such achievements as both of us have the same goal. So teaching process will be more effective. But, at the same time, obdurate students will likely to learn few.
Finally, Learning from a person having different opinion leads to negative results sometimes war also. The Civil war in the past of Nepal is one of the examples of it. The consequences of political debate lead to war in severe condition. So, the results of the discussion with the people having a different opinion are not good.
Some people might say , learning from the discussion is better, thinking that : it will gestate some new ideas. However, in a TV interview, we see, the political discussion leads to nothing results, just waste of time and money. In conclusion, learning will be effective from the person having a similar feeling, which ultimately gives the positive results.
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- 1.Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated. 50
- Claim: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own.Reason: Disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning. 16
- Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in aforeign country. 50
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- College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain y 50
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238726790451 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.132625994695 0.157235817809 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0928381962865 0.0880659088768 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0583554376658 0.0497285424764 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0291777188329 0.0444667217837 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119363395225 0.12292977631 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0344827586207 0.0406280797675 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68586044858 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0291777188329 0.030933414821 94% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.116710875332 0.0997080785238 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.026525198939 0.0249443105267 106% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0132625994695 0.0148568991511 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2008.0 2732.02544248 73% => OK
No of words: 332.0 452.878318584 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04819277108 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373493975904 0.366273622748 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274096385542 0.280924506359 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.210843373494 0.200843997647 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129518072289 0.132149295362 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68586044858 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515060240964 0.48968727796 105% => OK
Word variations: 53.6430581407 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.6 23.380412469 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6443295286 59.4972553346 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4 141.124799967 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 23.380412469 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.674092028746 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 44.0096385542 51.4728631049 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.78313253012 1.64882698954 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21669364282 0.391690518653 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122343699481 0.123202303941 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0886693034478 0.077325440228 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.553600455884 0.547984918172 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148388647042 0.149214159877 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863715473994 0.161403998019 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376518679627 0.0892212321368 42% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.367888860792 0.385218514788 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0543594014876 0.0692045440612 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143686121867 0.275328986314 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320356380869 0.0653680567796 49% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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