Most of our information comes from the Internet nowadays. Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect. Do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, we are living in industry 4.0 age, and most of our information comes from in the internet. Some people say that a large of part information we get is incorrect. I agree that because there are a lot of tabloid and imposter .
The tabloid is posted on the internet too much. Many people cannot recognize fake news. In media , they always warn against tabloid for netizen and citizen. Because of danger, many people are invited to police station and got punishment. Because they share fake news to make disenchanted for netizen about government. Although, they do not know it's from tabloid.
Today, there are a lot of imposters. They frequently post wrong information on the internet so that they can cheat money and looting information. According to samcombank bank, they are got situations by customers. Their customers to click to a link by a message that counterfeit sacombank bank. After that, they lost a lot of money.
In conclusion,I agree that most of part informations on the internet is incorrect. many tabloids and imposters has posted on the internet recently. It make our difficult to find real informations on the internet. Moreover, it can bring danger for citizen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Nowadays, we are living in industry 4.0 ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun tabloid seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of tabloids'.
Suggestion: a lot of tabloids
...correct. I agree that because there are a lot of tabloid and imposter . The tabloid is po...
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Suggestion: .
... there are a lot of tabloid and imposter . The tabloid is posted on the int...
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...re are a lot of tabloid and imposter . The tabloid is posted on the internet to...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ple cannot recognize fake news. In media , they always warn against tabloid for ne...
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Line 2, column 324, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...enchanted for netizen about government. Although, they do not know its from tabloid. ...
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...gh, they do not know its from tabloid. Today, there are a lot of imposters. The...
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...After that, they lost a lot of money. In conclusion,I agree that most of part ...
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...ost a lot of money. In conclusion,I agree that most of part informations on...
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Suggestion: Many
...ormations on the internet is incorrect. many tabloids and imposters has posted on th...
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Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...has posted on the internet recently. It make our difficult to find real informations...
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...over, it can bring danger for citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98994974874 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82843587584 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577889447236 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.6071424751 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.1666666667 106.682146367 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.0555555556 20.7667163134 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.72222222222 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339730985293 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110121370414 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167136611895 0.0667982634062 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255865159871 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.228996896304 0.056905535591 402% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.48 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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