In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What types of changes are occurring?
Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
Family has undoubtedly been an integral part of society, with its dynamics unchanged since the dawn of time. Nevertheless, society’s evolution is commensurate with changes in aspects of life, including the autonomy of a family. Personally, it is my contention that the positives brought about by these alterations far outweigh its negatives.
To commence with, when it comes to structural moderations, the most prevalent is the vast variety in the components of a household. Terms like single-parent family, adoptive family, same-sex family, et cetera are invented to adapt to this new development. For the first time the word ‘family’ are not restricted to those bound by the bonds of blood, but by the bonds of commitment and care. To explicite, a household now can comprises a gay or heterosexual couple, paving the way for the acquisition of a happy home for many individuals without confiding to social conventions. The human drive for happiness is one of the most fundamental needs that our society runs on, and pushing the boundaries of what it means to be a family not only fuels it, it further expanded on it.
Another change to acknowledge is regarding the household positions. With the roles interchangeable, the tile of home-maker or breadwinner can now be applied to any member of a family regardless of their sex. For instand, mothers can now choose to take on a more male-dominant position of the financial provider, and fathers can adhere to the more feminen role of a stay-at-home parent. This newly found diversity not only applies to the domestic sector, but also the working one. With more women encouraged to pursue their professional career, promoting inclusivity in the workplace, it increases the volume of human resources by enhancing the demographic for employees.
To encapsulate, though opinions are divided, I am of the firm-seated belief that reshaping the definition of family is drastically changing various aspects of our lives for the better, referencing the arguments above. Regarding this development, it is society’s job as a whole to futher amplify the merits of the case.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20991253644 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16605189564 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606413994169 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1686560796 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.133333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153532199157 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487024699105 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439413266889 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946315813005 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250070331548 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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