It is believe that advertising can say a lot about a country To what extent do you agree with this statement

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... century advertisement content developed throughout the world. Where in, region r...
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... world. Where in, region related adverts is say much more about that place but do...
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.... I partially believe that advertisement is not sufficient for most details of co...
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...country. The following paragraph discuss my point of view and lead to logical con...
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...n the one hand, commercial advertisement is connected with regional data for incr...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...h regional data for increase to promote a items/products. They will show some tra...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a item' or simply 'items'?
Suggestion: a item; items
...h regional data for increase to promote a items/products. They will show some tradition...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ient historical place such as Ranki-Lake ,Maharaja palace extra. On the other h...
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...r products with interfering with country culture data and showing fake ,hence th...
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...s with interfering with country culture data and showing fake ,hence the audienc...
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Suggestion: ,
... country culture data and showing fake ,hence the audience is get wrong informa...
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... showing fake ,hence the audience is get wrong information of that area. For exam...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...ng their products like their product is more stronger and reliable than ancient marble and al...
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...tising is done by video editing software with energetic music to increase attenti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, well, for example, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32882882883 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85167867412 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617117117117 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0730044529 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.545454545 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147319222563 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554991147004 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473517354263 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963547134261 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447992625824 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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