People across the world are more similar than they are different. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people claim that individuals living across the world are very similar in their characteristics and behaviour. I agree with this notion to a large extent that, despite having cultural differences, people behave similarly in different situations.
Admittedly, people of different colour, race, and beliefs are united together by a common thread, humanity. For instance, amidst the corona pandemic all over, people fought together against the virus, demonstrating/proving their unity and brotherhood. Moreover, in this age of technology and information, people are free to wear and buy any clothes through online portals and thus obviate diversity. Apart from this, English has become a lingua franca due to its widespread usage in jobs; therefore, speaking a common language makes people more similar than different. Even people’s eating habits are becoming similar. Due to globalization, the same kind of foods, clothes, and other products are available everywhere.
Conversely, there are a few differences among the folks that will stay as long as they are attached to their cultural roots. To illustrate, in the Hindu religion, cow killing is prohibited, whereas, in western countries, beef is a popular dish. In addition to it, while Indians greet people by joining hands, natives of several other countries shake hands or kiss when they meet people. Therefore, these dissimilarities in eating habits, greeting patterns or clothing create cultural diversity and uniqueness. In my opinion, these are superficial differences that do not create a divide.
To finally conclude, although there are cultural and religious differences among people across the nations, they are all similar to each other because of one trait, humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, if, moreover, similarly, therefore, thus, whereas, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59245283019 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02172035053 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664150943396 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9161049488 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.857142857 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300581423921 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882776941788 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679635561438 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178586651519 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636473970892 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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