Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is the working hours of the work. There is widespread worry that this is leading to Detroit the personal life. I agree to this statement because the people want the better lifestyle than other. I will discuss the points which will support my own perspective.
There is deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that the people always want the better lifestyle than what they presently have. The people gives importance to work than their personal life. It can adversely affect their health and personal relationships with others. For example, my colleague work very hard to earn more money, he use to work on the holidays too. After few months his health problems started growing as he was working late in his firm.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that the time spent after family get reduced. As the working hours increases the time spent after family get reduced. For instance, one of my uncle work 12 hours a day for making more money. He also use to work on festive seasons. Due to this his friend circle is reduced and now he is least social.
In view of the agreements outlined above, one can conclude that spending more time at the work can contaminate the personal life which includes the social relations and health problems. Therefore, I think there must be some restriction over the working hours for the sake of employees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e work very hard to earn more money, he use to work on the holidays too. After few ...
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Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...e work very hard to earn more money, he use to work on the holidays too. After few ...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...rs a day for making more money. He also use to work on festive seasons. Due to this...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...rs a day for making more money. He also use to work on festive seasons. Due to this...
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Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orking hours for the sake of employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77911646586 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47319788837 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550200803213 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.627237578 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 104.977214359 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6470588235 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265038384454 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791886580426 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045859972958 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156104085964 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026798593455 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 12.6369458128 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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