Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Others think money and appearance are more important.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion
In today’s life, more and more people tend to focus on their career in order to achieve fame and fortune. However, different person has their different ways to be successful, People mostly rise to the top of their career as a result of hard work and have their own goals from the beginning but some choose to take advantage of their appearance or wealth to be promoted quickly in their job. In this essay, I will be discussing both points of view.
There are several benefits of success came from hardworking and determination. First of all, People often feel more satisfied when they are promoted after a period of working hard because they know that their effort has been pay off. For instance, when students study all day long for their exams, when they achieved high score they will feel very cheerful. Moreover, having their own goals from the beginning of the career will help people gain more experiences and it could also help them avoid any distractions when they are on the way to achieve their aims.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that appearance and money also made a huge impact on people’s career. Firstly, using the money to expand relationships could help people influenced their colleagues or even their director. This will help them to be promoted rapidly in their job. Secondly, people’s looks could decide whether they will be promoted or not because in some cases even they are outstanding when doing their job but without the appearance, it is difficult for the employer to put them in a high position.
In conclusion, I personally believe that even though good appearance and money could help people to be successful, however, hard working and willpower could make people feel more satisfied and help them reached a higher position in their occupation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90819672131 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60500830348 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504918032787 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5234862309 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8333333333 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16573577533 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783014869401 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473871135671 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116965737367 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242292343717 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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