Some people prefer to spend holidays in resorts where everything is organized for them and they take little interest in the country they are visiting. Others prefer to travel around the country and to see how the people live, to get to know their customs and traditions and cuisine.
Write an essay on which type of foreign travel you think is best for both the tourist and the local community.
Nowadays many people want to spent their holiday in other places where they feel relax and stress free places. Some people want to spend their holidays in resorts and other interested to travel around the country which they visit. This essay will prudently persuade which option will best suits for both tourist and local community
To begin with, traveling to other places a improving the knowledge. In other words, when visiting to tourist places or historical places people con ensure the knowledge. Secondly, they can enjoy different cultures and traditions of the country and Varity of tasty food which they can’t enjoy in the resorts. For example, when people travel to places like historical places they can improve their knowledge.
Local communities will develop their business instead of resorts. In addition, if the people travel to all places in the country the local communities will develop more and revenue will increases by generating the different types employments. For instance, if the people enjoy the local food the revenue of the local restaurants will develop. Some countries like Singapore and Thailand are completely depended on tourism where there revenue is increasing day by day.
In conclusion, Even though, resorts provide many facilities, it cannot provide cuisine varieties of the country. To improve the knowledge and local language tourist need to round the country where they visit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...o begin with, traveling to other places a improving the knowledge. In other words...
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Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
...ties will develop more and revenue will increases by generating the different types emplo...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to round the country where they visit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35555555556 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49819688062 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3464943976 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.416666667 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293998577049 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126948513 0.0925447433944 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11517063568 0.071462118173 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18425811159 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900165196688 0.0609392437508 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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