Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought by some people that supermarkets, which are thriving at such a rapid pace, are going to affect the business of local people which have small business, and are unable to compete with these business tycoons. I opine in favor of this as I completely agreed with the statement. But before going into details, one should keep in mind that pros and cons are always there.
First of all, supermarkets have snatched local markets' customers with their lucrative advertisements, which have switched the customers to buy from them instead of local shops. It has been observed that in the last ten years, there is a notable hike in the percentage of customers who prefer to buy from these mega malls, causing a perceptible decline in the sales of local stores.
Moreover, these mega stores are also responsible for upheaval in local business by causing their profit to drop. The strategy of supermarket owners is to buy the stock in the bulk amount which cuts down the purchasing cost as well which in turn, lowers the prices of their products as well. However, small and medium business owners are unable to purchase at such a large scale and are forced to buy stock on full price but in order to compete with business giants, they have to cut down the prices of their products as well causing their profits to decline which could be the final nail in the coffin.
To conclude, supermarkets direct or indirectly disturbs the local business, and to resolve this issue, the government must take serious actions to support these micro business owners to let them survive.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-08 | erman..duran95 | 73 | view |
| 2019-11-17 | rakeshsharma.msbi | 61 | view |
| 2019-11-06 | sudheerssmg | 73 | view |
| 2018-12-06 | kharechapratik | 91 | view |
| 2018-09-18 | Ramandeep Dhillon | 73 | view |
- Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agr 61
- Some people become famous at young age. Is it good thing or bad thing. 73
- Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views. 56
- In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :Give detail of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, so, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47814571943 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536764705882 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.49507469 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.444444444 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2222222222 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205029329064 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849429312933 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780978725545 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128352796195 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354695260142 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.