What are the advantages and disadvantages of having older people living in the family home?
one of the most controversial issues today releates to the older people. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view.
On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that there are many benefits of older people having in our home.The main reason for believing this is that 'encourage'.older people encourage us to do good in our future life.Moreover, they have great knowledge and excellence power.Older people have strong communication skills. They are role model for us. Old people make our home well by applying the old methouds because they have knowledge how to deal with difficulties. If we can feel stressed and feeling some difficulties in our life we can take help from old people by hearing some stories because his stories are real and truthful which give some knowledge to us and we can apply this in our future life.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make opposing case.It is often argued that older people have very strict behaviour they always deal strictly with every person because they are old generation people and they doesn't know the development of the modernisation era.People often have this opinion because they are facing fear in sharing our feelings in our home because of older people.
A third point is that many older people have facing diseases which affect us or our home environment.we get some disease from us because nowadays disease occur from one person to another.Moreover,our nation have no jobs due to the corruption in India so they cannot spend so much money in the hospital.
We have seen, there are number of answer to this question on balancing however, I tend to believe that there are many people who are facing disadvantages of this because of they cannot spend so much money in the hospital on their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, third, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81993569132 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69451841388 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501607717042 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.82417424 49.4020404114 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.555555556 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5555555556 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217501479974 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963384212617 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780022936878 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123331174245 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499438719075 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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