Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the numbers of the crime rate which can only be controlled by a set of law. There is widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in rules and regulation. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant is that law helps to be secured and create a feeling of relief environment. Not only it creates a sustainable environment but it also creates security for a citizen. We can find overwhelming evidence in support of the fact that rules and regulation changes human behaviour. Needless to say, all these merits stand people in good stead as far as following a law is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that law helps to provide right also helps to fight against the criminal. Besides, criminal activities are higher where there is lack of rules and regulation. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of a law which protects against them.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that benefits of a law are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7033492823 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78914128035 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569377990431 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8954840075 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.3636363636 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105478367634 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365056501505 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334742987011 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585278121188 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032999410759 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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