Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals?
In the modern era, more and more people are migrating to the west ran country for study and other aspects is career. The migrated person is new for the environment and face fear from resident people as fear is called as Xenophobia. Xenophobia gives rise to racism and increase in discrimination towards foreigners. All the side of this contention will be discussed in the upcoming paragraph will order to deduce reasonable outcomes.
In this paragraph I will be elaborated this term, the man live in the Africa the fear from stranger. They think that foreigner and other people will come in Africa for main purpose is harming them. People of the different culture will threaten to them and use abusing words for stranger. They don’t allow to get enter in the land. For instance, in 1994 the youth of gang will destroyed the home of stranger in the Johannesburg.
Furthermore, people will be narrowing minded in his circle the government will allow to settle seminars and also camp. They will gain huge knowledge about strangers. Foreigners and residents of the country should understand each other’s culture and traditions and respect them equally.
At the end recapitulating the whole discussing, I conceded that they will be gain knowledge about stranger and get out the bad thinking about people. Relationship will be gets stronger in them when they go in our country they say all people of that country are very peaceful and help very much. So that more and more people will travel in country and get near the relation in between them
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 404, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'deducing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: deducing
...ed in the upcoming paragraph will order to deduce reasonable outcomes. In this paragra...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
...rds for stranger. They don't allow to get enter in the land. For instance, in 199...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'destroy'
Suggestion: destroy
...nstance, in 1994 the youth of gang will destroyed the home of stranger in the Johannesbur...
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Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'settling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: settling
...in his circle the government will allow to settle seminars and also camp. They will gain ...
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Line 6, column 389, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd get near the relation in between them
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9465648855 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68542848254 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526717557252 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4779836989 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.4 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.25397266985 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0488437984429 0.242375264174 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0189941248014 0.0925447433944 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0223864044711 0.071462118173 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0357289448635 0.151781067708 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149178528179 0.0609392437508 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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