Problem and benefits for high school students study plays and work of theatres written centuries ago. Discuss and use your own experience.
These days, interest of doing theatre on ancient and traditional values is enlighten. However, there are some people those do not agree with the statement that students should take part in plays those reflect the traditional values. In this essay, there will be an examination on both sides of contention before deducing an even handed conclusion.
To commence with, there are significant amount of students those are interested in study of old civilization, so they have a chance to demonstrate the living style of old people in front of public. Moreover, performing in front of considerable amount of people helps students to become a prominent personality in society because it can help juveniles to flourish their talent.
On the flip side, there are numerous people those consider that these type of plays do not fit in modern or real life an account of, they are old fashion. Nonetheless, scads of teenagers find these subjects tedious yet they do not want to act in these type of plays.
Agglomerating the above elaborated points, I strongly believe that every person should understand the importance of life which was lived by ancient people and the best way of cognition of old civilizations life is performing acts by teenagers in schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enlightened'.
Suggestion: enlightened
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'civilizations'' or 'civilization's'?
Suggestion: civilizations'; civilization's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09178743961 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81719978408 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613526570048 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8587197538 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.75 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0549429748957 0.242375264174 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257198592307 0.0925447433944 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222937895243 0.071462118173 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0310671554028 0.151781067708 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023075069795 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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