Whether design of buildings will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work?
One of the most contentious issues today relates to how building codes interfere on human's life. Some people think that the appearance of archirectures boosts up people's activity, while others argue that the looks merely symbolic and irrelevant to human function. This essay will examine why design of buildings have numerous positive impacts on everyone life and work.
To begin with, focusing on crafting a good construction is essential. Workers tend to be more productive when they are under a relax and calm environment. Every year, for example, thoundsands of new constructions have been under erected and their rate is rapidly increasing over the years. Despite the exponential growth of new blocks, people are still conviced to purchase more houses because they believe that a good shelter will bring them a good life.
Although, some people are concerned the liability of unecessarily complex archirectures. These people are unware of the comfortability of living in eye-catching and clean environment.
In conclusion, human lifestyle depends on the architecture of their shelter, though the inevitability of its unpleasant colours or shape may impact on certain part of our life. It is believed that in the near future, the restriction on design of buildings will become more lenient and eventually supersede the oddly traditional housing and blocks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...ates to how building codes interfere on humans life. Some people think that the appear...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... be more productive when they are under a relax and calm environment. Every year, for e...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...shelter will bring them a good life. Although, some people are concerned the liabilit...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...necessarily complex archirectures. These people are unware of the comfortability ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43192488263 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98348588666 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.433800551 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.181818182 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295154273746 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955110491417 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118009153648 0.071462118173 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157274349333 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107335278439 0.0609392437508 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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