Successful sports starts and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do you support or not?
Nowadays, celebrities have created an inevitable impression on our lives, they are becoming an integral part and role models for the young generation. This phenomenon has stirred a debate across the world, many people believe that successful people are the role models for youngsters, whereas opponents think blindly following famous people can create a myriad of problems. In my opinion, the young generation should not follow sports or film actors aimlessly, further, this essay will illustrate the advantages and disadvantages of the role of sports stars and actors in the society.
To commence with, young generation mimics every action such as fashion, eating habits and talking style of glamorous movie stars. It is quite evident that celebrities live an opulent lifestyle and spend a humongous amount of money to maintain their lifestyle. In addition to that, many sport or movie stars are not only engaged in drugs, violence but also show aggression, misbehaviour in public space. Furthermore, many sports person take performance-enhancing medicines, which further creates a negative influence on the young generation. For example, Tiger Woods, a famous Golf player was caught while taking drugs. So, it is clear that following the footsteps of celebrities must be carefully chosen.
In contrast, there are a handful of celebrities, who preach and follow good practices. They not only stay away from the unlawfulness but also motivate young people. For example, Sachin Tendulkar, a famous cricketer has motivated many young people across the world and opened up a plethora of career opportunities.
In conclusion, it is safe to assert that the young generation should not blindly follow the celebrities, therefore a careful evaluation and a pragmatic approach should be considered before selecting a role model.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sport seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sports'.
Suggestion: many sports
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...iour in public space. Furthermore, many sports person take performance-enhancing medic...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ught while taking drugs. In contrast, there are a handful of celebrities, who ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'handfuls', 'handsful'?
Suggestion: handfuls; handsful
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... up a plethora of career opportunities. In conclusion, it is safe to assert that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48698884758 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98080072334 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1669550164 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.25397266985 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19429570298 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578675860598 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514564316915 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101880029456 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814717684797 0.0609392437508 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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