Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Nowadays, most employed people have no physical activity in their leisure time and in the workplace. Therefore they get a lot of problems with their health conditions. This essay discusses why working human beings do not get enough physical exercises and how the government can encourage these people to overpass the difficulties.
The reasons why the working community does not want to do a lot of exercises because they do not have any free time to do that, and also they have tiredness from the contemporary pace modern life. On the work, the average man spends around twelve hours, plus he must sleep approximately eight hours. Moreover, people need to take care of their children and old parents, who as well take time from their day. Furthermore, the modern temp of life leaves a print on mental and physical condition. The current world stimulates every human being to be in the race of money. It means what you need more products more things which you do not require, and it consumes a lot of energy and strength from our bodies.
However, the government can help by stimulating and encouraging people to do physical activity. For example, the administration may build sports facilities closer to places where people work and live. Also, they can provide programmes which will provide a system of benefits for people who attend athletic buildings twice a week. But, people can be encouraged by conducting sports events and developing the culture of sport.
In conclusion, the contemporary style of life to lead us to spend a lot of time on work and no time to support our health. But despite this, there a lot of actions can be done by the government to improve this situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...heir leisure time and in the workplace. Therefore they get a lot of problems with their h...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... government to improve this situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89273356401 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67372192409 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.596932371 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27315241739 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857648790684 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756932721183 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172882187767 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818502703804 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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