The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The issues of nuclear technology have been discussed controversially around the world for a long time. Some people consider the danger caused by nuclear weapons, while others reckon that this kind of technology can bring a number of benefits to human beings. In my opinion, although there are some drawbacks in nuclear technology, I believe that the advantages do outweigh these drawbacks.
On the one hand, nuclear technology can be applied to the various field, such as military or the needs of the domestic. Nuclear weapons have a notorious reputation all over the world since it may leave lots of inevitable damage to people. For example, the cities in Japan were destroyed by the explosion of atomic bombs during the Second World War causing plenty of death and wound people. Also, the descendants in that place where left an amount of radiation hazard suffered from incurable disease for several decades. Besides, the plants producing electricity to people can be easily destroyed by natural disasters, such as tsunami, earthquake, if they do not have enough protection.
On the other hand, the merit of this technology is that it is an effective alternative to producing energy. The main reason is that human beings can obtain a great deal of energy from nuclear plants with little substances. Also, instead of burning fossil fuels causing lots of emissions which speeds up global warming, nuclear plants produce electricity without any pollution. Therefore, we can say that nuclear technology is one of the most effective methods to produce energy that can indeed solve the biggest problems which human beings are facing.
To sum up, nuclear technology may bring some drawbacks to people, but those drawbacks can be controlled by human beings. Also, it can effectively improve the problems of environmental degradation. Therefore, its benefits outweigh the cons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for example, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25249169435 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73723508913 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4581662511 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2045739257 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074116680981 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475269178408 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135787257941 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045038770965 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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