Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
people have different opinions about what kind of sports should choose for. While some people opt for playing individual sports, I personally prefer to playing team sports.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that playing sports individually has some benefits. firstly, the player of this kind of sport would control strict timetable without relying on other players, which is favorable for people who have a hectic schedule. it is exactly opposite to a football player, thus he must be waiting until other members gather on the pitch. Secondly, playing individual sports will enhance self-relevance. there is an environment for players who play by their own can motivate themselves in order to achieve a goal. In this way, players always feel sense of purpose and meaning in their recreation, as a result, a sense of fulfillment.
On the other hand, I am more in favor of team sports because of its wider range of upside. team sports provide people opportunities to meet new people and make friends with others who share common interests, consequently, contributing to expanding their social circle. Another merit is the improvement of interpersonal skills such as teamwork ability and leadership competency. a good reason for this is football players need to closely cooperate with other members to defeat the other team. For those who play as a leader or captain of a team, there are chances for them to foster their leadership skills through setting strategies and motivating teammates towards a viction.
in conclusion, in my opinion, team sports have more advantages than individual sports, in term of larger social network and improving soft skills
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17100371747 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79712542981 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9909994418 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3571428571 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191247929289 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749859297322 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586003818306 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13609764241 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520267490234 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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