More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people to rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part the natural movement of workers around the world. Discuss and give your opinion?
Nowadays, many well educated people are immigrating to wealthy nations to take up specialist jobs such as engineering, computing and healthcare. Few people believe that this encouragement given by rich countries is equivalent of stealing from poor countries. Whereas others consider it as a normal movement of work force across the globe. I feel that world has become small since we can travel anywhere in the planet and people should be given the options of better employment let it be in a wealth or a impoverish place. In the coming paragraphs I am going to discuss in detailed about both theses taught.
On one hand, a belief called " Brain Drain" has become very popular recently. Few people think that intellectuals from the poor areas of the world are getting out of their places and reaching destinations which give them good salaries and hence, causing loss of valuable employees in poor nations. For example, most of the students in Indian institute of technology (a world-class engineering institution in India) after completing their courses invariable leave the country to settle in United states of America.
On the other hand, there is an alternative belief of globalization. People consider that world is shrinking, as travel time is decreasing in a remarkable way.This has lead to the notion that all parts of the world are the same and movement of people for better employment reasons to other areas is a normal process and cannot be considered a loss.
To summaries, I strongly believe that re-location of people for good employment opportunities ls normal though some people compare it with stealing from poor and I do not agree to the same as world has become small and every place is similar.
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- School teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The best way to reduce youth crime is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- In many countries plastic bags are one of the main sources of damage to the environment and so they should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ter employment let it be in a wealth or a impoverish place. In the coming paragraphs I am go...
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...shrinking, as travel time is decreasing in a remarkable way.This has lead to the notion that all pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, well, whereas, for example, i feel, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03484320557 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84193710175 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4795237397 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.363636364 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295470317131 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102951564242 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116581126005 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173848261897 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726035235529 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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