Roles of government, companies and individuals to combat climate change
In modern few decades, climate has been changing step by step. The continuous increase of companies, factories, and transportation pollution is also increased by this climate changes take place. By this transportation, pollution may cause some disease and we can’t even breathe properly. And humans are burning the tree and clearing the forest for their needs it may lead to a greenhouse effect. we can see in some areas there was rainfall in other places it may not rain it's because of climate changes in the world. Due to these changes we see winter in summer and summer in winter.
Everyone should participate by the individual or co-operate with government taking process. Firstly we should plant a tree rather than cutting tree and forest. other then climate change takes place by companies it may release a huge amount of smoke it will pollute the environment badly. Instead in companies, they can use smoke purifiers inside the chimney by this it cause less amount of smoke pollution in the environment. The government should also take some state law to control it. also, they use to give some awareness to people about the environment in media, radio, tv ext., they can even give some advertisements in newspapers or making progress in urban and rural areas.
In the end, I will say climate changes is a serious issue and it has harmful effects In our body. we should control it. And governments should take serious impact on this climate change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94331983806 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68121974795 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566801619433 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5350876813 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.25397266985 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156247860054 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565010873816 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593937279869 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112503559529 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251099536462 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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