The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007.
The table graph depicts the income from trading of laptop of different corporation in the years 2006 and 2007.
It is clear that, HP companies sold their laptop with highest number in 2007 other than all companies. Least earning showed from Fujitsu-Siemens companies in 2006 and 2007.
As the graph shows, the income of HP company was highest through the period at 31.4% in 2006 compared with 34% in 2007. Toshiba and Lenovo had revenue income was similar stood at 6.2% and 6.6% respectively but the income increased to 7.3% for Toshiba in 2007 while the selling decreased for Lenovo in 2007. Afterwards, There was only 16.6% money spent for Dell laptop but expenditure experienced a rise to 20.2% in next year.
According to Acer and Fujitsu-simens company, despite having little interest among the people to buy notebook the revenue income accounted for about 11.6% and 10.7% respectively not with stand, it decreased surprisingly by 1% for Acer and 2.5% for Fujitsu and Siemens. Lastly, we can see that, Annual income for other companies started at 22.8%, for 2006 and ended up with 19.3% in 2007.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: with the highest
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Suggestion: The Least
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the highest'.
Suggestion: was the highest
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96774193548 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57182632956 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3609458457 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203259406938 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997114098921 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418918483613 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134829239709 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232780119088 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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