Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the world of globalisation, people migrate to different nations either for studies or for a better job opportunity. The individual needs to understand the prevailing culture of that particular Nation in order to get settled in a better way. However, it is believed by some that getting involved in a new culture can bring social as well as practical problems for people who are migrating. In my opinion, people should keep learning new language and culture as it will solve their upcoming challenges rather increasing them.
Firstly, practical problems come when a person is not able to learn the new culture. Being, in a job or studies, it accompanies interacting with one another for different reasons. Although, everyone is aware of such issues still some shy away because they feel new county people can misunderstand them, leading to more problems. For instance, it has come in a study that 40% of practical problems have come for people who were not attempting to learn a new culture. Hence, this is questionable debate here, if a person encounters him or her in a dangerous situation and is not able to speak the native language then how can they save themselves? This leads us to believe that learning a new language is always beneficial.
On contrary, few argue with a belief that moving to a new place could bring social discrimination, where in, people are either racist or would disrespect a foreigner in their native country. This is certainly true but it is restricted to only for few numbers. On the larger scale, academic institutions and companies have set a high standard for disallowing any kind of racism or social discrimination. Illustrating, companies in Canada cannot discriminate between a non native and the native person. If they involve in this kind of practices, then they need to pay heavy consequences.
Concluding, person migrating to different country needs to be open to learning new culture thus Lessening the varied social and practical problems. I opine, learning and understanding a new language would surely benefit everyone moving in to a different country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, still, then, thus, well, for instance, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0632183908 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97388665716 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537356321839 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2982037723 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.647058824 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129284322056 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421623543704 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407967148457 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815530428019 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186580604457 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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