Companies use advertisements to influence people to buy things sometimes which they don’t need. Give your opinion about this practice?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that most of the countries use advertising strategies to grab customers attention for those products which they actually don't need. In my opinion, this statement is more realistic and worth to believe. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the most important features of this statement before deducing any conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that advertisements are often used to showcase the unnecessary products to influence customers for buying. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that advertisement is the basic tool for companies to promote their newly launches products. Therefore, for this campaign they are hiring celebrities and famous personalities all across the world for promoting their their advertising campaigns. For instance, famous chinese brands of latest gadgets are sponsored by cricketers and movie stars through commercials for maximum sale of the expensive products.
Another, pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that increasing trend of advertisement is seen among national and international brands to influence people to buy some unnecessary products which includes, certain buy one get one free articles and other related strategies.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that advertisement is the key factor which not only influence people to buy irrelevant things but also provokes customers to spend their savings on these expensive items. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: their
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Suggestion: of the latest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69834710744 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99190961094 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623966942149 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0568287943 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.9 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237158808213 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849016879859 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552693765501 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139895656502 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271596617089 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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