You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.
Dear Sir,
I am a customer of your bank from last 10 years. I am happy with the banking with your bank. I am writing to this for miscommunication towards the overdrawn charge.
Generally, I like to manage my budget and expence at the staring of the month to maintain the economy of my family. Recently I got the letter from the bank regarding the overdrawn of 240 dollars and the charge for that will be apply for 80 dollars. So, I double checked my last month statement and didn't find any entry which indicates the extra usage apart from the provided limit to me.
I also inform regarding this to the bank manager via call and he asure me that if it not related to you than we will sure decline this and letter will not come to you further for the same subject.
I want to know the exact reason behind this mishappening beacuse if in future, this kind of situation occure than I can takell it properly.
Hoping for the double check with the entres of my bank transaction and decline to send the letter for the same subject.
Thanks,
Kalpesh Sangani.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... happy with the banking with your bank. I am writing to this for miscommunication...
^
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I double checked my last month statement and didnt find any entry which indicates...
^^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...le checked my last month statement and didnt find any entry which indicates the extr...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...son behind this mishappening beacuse if in future, this kind of situation occure than I c...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, apart from, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50256410256 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38894010923 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574358974359 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.54402083 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321352577715 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109090180662 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941273354548 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152431348964 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794740315121 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.