Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.
Recently, I read an article regarding the growing interest in permanent immigration in Kazakhstan. In the article, some travel agents claim that it is beneficial for immigrants. However, some social workers state that it has many downsides. In this essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of this tendency.
Let us start with benefits of working and living in other countries. The first advantage is that it frequently allows starting afresh. Most people, who have dissatisfaction with either their employment or lifestyle, have the opportunity to change a scenery, since in another country, they can discover new career prospects as well as find fresh acquaintances. Another merit is that it normally enables people to improve their foreign language skills. Immigrants also have the excellent chance to practice the official language of the host country, while they work and live overseas by mixing with locals. Therefore, it is clear that residence and employment abroad offer a multitude of upsides for newcomers.
Despite these advantages, working and dwelling often create the majority of problems to immigrants. Firstly, it usually makes people feel homesick. Immigrants often miss their motherland, because they misunderstand local cultures and refuse to participate in social interaction, which can lead to homesickness and shortage of friends. Secondly, it does not guaranty the improvement of living standards. Numerous people, who change citizenships, fail to build another life overseas again, since it is frequently difficult for newcomers to obtain desired jobs. As a result, it is obvious that people face many problems, if they decide to leave their country.
In conclusion, even though changing citizenship for either residence or occupation has plenty of advantageous effects on immigrants, It also creates many hindrances for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57394366197 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96990083171 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637323943662 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9476542601 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1176470588 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177966154418 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474295988381 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495474332498 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839172052525 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614559313182 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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