Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Physical activities such as sports play an essential role in growing up process of children; therefore, many people hold the belief that sports lessons should be considered as an obligatory subject at school. However, opt for the opposite view and hereby will consider three reason that sports are free option.
First of all, when organizing a sport lesson, schools need to spend a lot of money on sports facilities. For instance, they have to provide uniform, many schools have up to thousands of students and each sport needs different clothes. Moreover, building stadium and swimming pool is very necessary. Furthermore, they must hire more trainers. Paying for medical care is also important.
The second reason happens to children in general and school girls in specific, some young people do not enjoy sports. Instead of playing sports, they choose to read comics or watch cartoon movies. Besides, many students enjoy art. They would rather join a performance or paint a picture than play sports.
On other hand, some people believe that sports lessons are a waste of valuable study time. Most children have to learn so many subject, such as math, literature, chemistry. They have less free time. Consequently, they want to choose others activities, not at school. They can go camping or go to coffee shop with their friends, even spending all time to sleep at home.
All things considered, playing sports is good for them health, but I do not believe that children have to learn sports mandatorily at school. In my opinion, sports lesson should not be compulsory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for instance, in general, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06538461538 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54105636609 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5143299797 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1666666667 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4444444444 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200743451401 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615341327892 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562795627871 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115108334434 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469727673725 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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