Should the authorities from big cities around the world discourage citizens from using private cars and rather encourage them to use other means of transport such as bicycles, skates, the subway, etc.?
The importance of transports, which was always debatable has now become more controversial. The significant influence of transports such as bicycles, skates, subway has sparked over impact of the potential controversy regarding the higher number of private car over the cities increasing pollutions in recent years. It can be agreed that using different types of transport can advantage for cities and for healthy life style, Therefore, This will essay will elaborate how and why authorities are trying to discourage citizies from using private cars and how can this effect can affect positively in many ways thus it will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset there are many reasons why should avoid using private cars, but the most conspicuous one steams from the fact that the environment is requesting urgently a change. As an illustration, a Unversity of Adelaide study has shown that traffic has increasily dramatically. However affects everyone.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks which might overwhelm the significan the influence of not using a private transport, but the most alarming one is rooted from the fact that pollutions have reached a topic leve. For instance, people are getting more healthy problems.
From what has been discussed above, it can be conclued that the significantly influence of changing lifestyle is distinguished, although being comfortable for having a private transport should not be overlooked.
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99558193196 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.3666607164 50.4703680194 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259257125881 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792481008118 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736779391634 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137832119987 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509266264832 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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