satisfying job
Nowadays, with the fierce competition and rapid development, finding a job tend to get harder and hard, not to say a secure job. So when facing the opportunity of a secure job, many people would feel too difficult to reject. But in my opinion, waiting for a more satisfying job would be more reasonable. My reasons are as follows.
Firstly, satisfying jobs give you a brighter future. Instead of relying on a safe but plain job, most successful people archive their success by chasing their dreams. Take Ruiyin Lee as an example. Now Ruiyin is one of the most famous scientist in the world. When he was young and poor, he loved nothing but science. Although he could barely make his ends meet, he never gave up his research. However, his parents was so worried about his future and found him a job in a government department, which is a secure job with no enthusiasm. He refused that job immediately. Finally, his enthusiasm of research made him the best scientist of the world.
Secondly, we have to admit the fact that the wages of secure jobs are usually low. With that little income, people could afford neither the top schools for their children nor the decent condo for their family. But if you wait for the satisfying job with high payment, you will be able to provide a better life for the people you love. For instance, my uncle used to work in a small town with pretty good security. But when his son was old enough to go to the high school, he realized that his wage was too low to afford the best high school. For the future of his son and himself, he took the challenge and started to look for a job with better money. To be honest, that new job was sometimes frustrating. But with the satisfying payment, he was finally able to help his son accomplish his dream of the Top 10 university. Thus we can conclude that satisfying job makes a better life for your family.
Thirdly, compare with secure jobs, satisfying jobs make us feel happier, which is very crucial for our mental health. On the other hand, secure jobs are usually routine works which could readily make us feel disappointed. There is a recent paper published on Nature Medicine which is one of the most reliable scientific journal. That paper found that doing repeating works every day lead can lead to mental disease. On the contrary, doing works with joy would likely to prolong our lives. This research illustrate the importance of having a satisfying job.
In a nut sheet, don't settle on secure jobs when we are still young, because satisfying jobs are worth waiting for. They are not only good for your career, but also good for your family welfare.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, as to, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2170.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60721868365 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41131575662 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505307855626 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9240826685 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3333333333 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386986894324 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122349289897 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133389230822 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261267611787 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415530715239 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.