In some countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays in some countries we have witnessed a significant decline in their economics. More and more people said that each countries should focus on their own issue but others argued that in this cases all of the countries should world in a unity. In my following essay I will discuss both view agreement and disagreement.
It can be clear seen that, in last three month our planet faced a seriously global problem called COVID19.So in this cases
each government should take responsibility to slove this hazard, that is to say as you know the organization called UN and UNESCO they have agreement between nations when one of the member country of this organization got into troubles all members of this organization have to help to weaker nation. As everybody know COVID19 is large outspread in USA despite a moderne equipment in healthy care, not only USA damages from COVID19, Italy , Spain and China also experienced dilemmas as a USA. From the latest news USA found vaccine to this viruses and give out to poor natios which they come up against an economical problems, it is a on of the unique characteristics of humanity.
On the other hand, it is true that in fast developing century weaker nations could not competing with developed countries as a result they are limping in a economy. Moreover, if the government cold not provided their nations by financial they want helping hands from foregin countries to sort out problems as a resulte people's are getting depends on foreign support and also nation becomes coach potato to watch free helping to them by charitable persons. Naturally selfish countries focused on their problems and also they hopeful some supports.
To sum up, cosmopolitan nations should take more responsibility to underdeveloped countries and also not to forgot their problems
Abduvakhabov Mukhammadkarim
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07920792079 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85783710989 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
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Language errors: 49.0 5.01903807615 976% => Less language errors wanted.
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Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956971757167 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673023815574 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103947398362 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697797060901 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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