Advertisements are becoming more and more common in our everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development
There is an irrefutable fact that as more and more new products come out to fulfill people's physical and spiritual needs, advertisements appear all over the place to stimulate purchasing impulses in the customers. This trend has several negative impacts, but its positive sides are also considerable.
On the one hand, advertisements have a downside that they appear with high density, which annoyed people and worsen the image of the city. Too much adverts shown during commercial breaks during a programe really annoying. Moreover, a multitude of ads on the streets' wall really an eyesore, especially when the papers are ripped they leave marks. The second negative side is the exaggeration of the value of the products. The illustration of the goods on the adverts is appealing and stunning, which tempted customers to pay for the product. Sometimes it results in a letdown.
On the other hand, using advertisements keep customers informed about newly-launched products. For example, ads in the supermarket contain useful information about the promotions and new food sale. Another advantage is that the advertising industry has created jobs for thousands of people all over the world, generating a diversity of employment opportunities. As too many people work in this industry, there would be a crisis if it collasped.
To conclude, while advertisements have many drawbacks, they still have some benefits.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e and worsen the image of the city. Too much adverts shown during commercial breaks ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, second, so, still, while, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37668161435 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05409150387 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4287827552 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2307692308 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128492475957 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369220888718 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469883007327 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791630325428 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722431580907 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e and worsen the image of the city. Too much adverts shown during commercial breaks ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, second, so, still, while, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37668161435 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05409150387 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4287827552 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2307692308 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128492475957 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369220888718 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469883007327 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791630325428 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722431580907 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.