Some people think that children should start school at a very young age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, people’s sentiments differed as to whether or not under school-age children should attend earlier school. From my personal perspective, I tend towards the standpoint that formal education system is more preferable for senior children. Therefore, this essay will look cautiously at both views and explain the reasons behind my opinion.
On the one hand, there are numerous perspicuous arguments for the commencement prematurely the school term for preschoolers. First and foremost, the advocates of this standpoint thoroughly assert that schools offered comprehensively educational environment which would be incentivized to form minors’ personality at the very young age. Furthermore, a abundance of parents these days regularly absent on account of their occupations, consequently, their little children would dangerously cope with somewhat of injurious circumstance due to the lack of consideration from adults. Perhaps, sending their children to school might be the vitally optimal decision in their situation.
On the other hand, the opponents have the exceedingly elaborate conviction against aforementioned viewpoint. The arguments in favor of this view is that the under-age children might be unable to absorb wholly knowledge based on their deficiently developmental cognitive capacities which could usually lead to the inadequate concentrated ability to focus on a completely simple lecture, and as a result, learning become totally pointless. Moreover, they believe if adults put children at an unsuitable age for studying under excessively detrimental pressure of learning and examination, ultimately the consequence could be more severe than we might think. A research conducted in Japan in 2015 perfectly exemplifies this situation, which represented an inextricably interwoven connection between an alarmed rise of autistic youngsters with a decrease of school-age of children in this country.
In conclusion, it is clear to me that it would be better for children to attend school at the right age to perfectly mature not only in physical well-being, but also in psychological health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
...y and age, people’s sentiments differed as to whether or not under school-age children should attend...
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Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ity at the very young age. Furthermore, a abundance of parents these days regular...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to become'
Suggestion: to become
...mple lecture, and as a result, learning become totally pointless. Moreover, they belie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7619047619 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2529011026 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.4836111772 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.25 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250372364269 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879241513352 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066075880049 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148281951056 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473680424616 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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