Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations. Others think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss these views and give your own opinion
There are many opinions surrounding foreign direct investment and hands-on support which is better for third world countries. In my view, support in the form of money or practical assistance and consultancy will bring different benefits. This essay will discuss both points of view.
On the one hand, I understand why some people argue that it is best to provide financial assistance to developing countries. This type of aid alleviates economic problems in poorer nations. Firstly, it enables governments to supply food, healthcare, freshwater and accommodation for the needy. Secondly, governments can use money source from abroad to invest in infrastructures such as roads, ports, airports and industrial zones, which boost comprehensive economic progress.
On the other hand, I do agree with those who believe that other forms of aid should be given. Sustainable growth does not merely depend upon money, but on technology and labour qualifications. It is clear that second-world countries do not own advanced technologies and the quality of in-country training is also very limited, that reduce the level of competition in the region as well as its position in the international arena. Therefore, technology transferring and labour force training in affluent countries have long-lasting effects on developing nations' economy, shortening the gap between the first-world countries and the second-world ones. Furthermore, developing areas are still young in governing and directing, particularly diplomacy and the resolution of serious issues like poverty, crime and unemployment so practical help and advice are indispensable for further advancement.
In conclusion, owing to the aforementioned arguments, it seems to me that support poor countries should not only be in the form of money injection but should also come in other forms such as advice and education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60915492958 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18763504173 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630281690141 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.631042059 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.538461538 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179739486327 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541927556423 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345179314702 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901085110713 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280964569456 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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