Many people choose to emigrate to other countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a foreign
country? Discuss with your own experience.
In the past, airline fare used to be unaffordable for common families. However, due to rapid technological advancement and globalization, emigrating to other countries is not as difficult. Some people claim that emigration grants a better future, whereas, some people prefer to stay in their own country. This essay will be analysing the merits and demerits of emigrating to other countries and lead to a plausible conclusion.
Firstly, there are numerous advantages for living in another country. It grants people to understand and appreciate a different culture and allows different cultures to be exchanged. Moreover, certain countries have better welfare and benefits, they ensure people could be well taken care of. For example, in Australia, governments really after the unemployed families and families that have low income.
Conversely, there are also various disadvantages for residing in a different country. Although in general perception, racism is wrong, it is still a commonly witnessed problem. Moreover, language barrier often comes in the way, nothing is more frustrating than having the need to learn a completely different language.
In conclusion, leaving one’s motherland and dwelling in an unfamiliar country could be intimidating. There is certainly not an absolute answer to this issue as there are both positive and negative impacts. Therefore, an individual should evaluate his/her needs thoroughly before making major decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70776255708 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03120692547 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65296803653 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.0167756232 50.4703680194 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.2857142857 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181158783519 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561639632619 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597229073693 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946000985565 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769069227358 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 53.1260098522 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.