Some people think that music plays an important role in society. Others think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is often argued that music significantly impacts on the society while other people disagree with it and think of music as a source of entertainment. This essay agrees that people introduced to musical culture are more educational and spiritually exalted than those who ignore this form of art at all. This essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that the influence of music on the community from the past until the present is considerable: from historical war music which were played during battles marking the beginning and the ends of the attacks and inspiring the warriors to the modern opera which brings to people's hearts feelings of peace and comfort. That is to say that music as a form of culture and education plays a large role in civilization. It is therefore agreed that music influences on the society and people ca not deny this fact. A prime example of it is a recent survey that revealed that people admitted their own perception of music as something higher spiritual and moral.
However, many disagree and have opinion that music is not a universal art form and does not effect on cultural spirituality of people but a simply part of any entertainment created for fun: from ancient court jesters who played musical parodies to modern electronic music which is meaningless in general. Despite this, human musical perception as a part of culture, education and high morality prevails among all those disagreements. For instance, The Times recently published the article about renovation and opening large amount of new musical schools for children due to the demand of growing the UK population.
In conclusion, while benefits of music as a form of art are obvious, some still feel that music is just a part of entertainment which holds an interest of audience. However, as long as the society keep l musical culture as an impact part of education music will always be important for people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...ors to the modern opera which brings to peoples hearts feelings of peace and comfort. T...
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Line 3, column 663, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s something higher spiritual and moral. However, many disagree and have opinion ...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...s not a universal art form and does not effect on cultural spirituality of people but ...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('simply') instead an adjective, or a noun ('part') instead of another adjective.
... on cultural spirituality of people but a simply part of any entertainment created for fun: f...
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Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ic will always be important for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9263803681 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72571515908 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533742331288 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.5435361587 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.833333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301866940776 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113184167395 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629244543725 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182148171319 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292585383511 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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