Some people prefer to raise children in the cities while others believe that children should be raised in the countryside.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Children can easily adapt to any environment. However, there is a view that children should raise in the cities while there is another aspect that the countryside is the best place to bring up children. Although, there are positive sides to both views. I prefer the idea that children should raise in the countryside. Let me outline the reasons for this.
Cities are generally more developed in many aspects such as education, transportation and healthcare. Therefore, by raising children in the city, parents can provide the best quality education, healthcare and other extracurricular facilities conveniently. For instance, in many cases, children who are brought up in metropolitan areas are more talented and forward. Whereas, in the countryside, due to the limited quality of such services and lack of opportunities, there is a tendency that children become backwards in later in life.
However, the countryside is rich with healthy foods and good environment. Good nutrition and abundance of space are critical for children. Conversely, if children were to bring up in towns, they would have to spend a good amount of their time in a limited space living a more sedentary life eating more processed foods, which can detrimentally affect to their health and well-being.
Additionally, in many cases children can live with their grandparents when they are in the village. Which indeed an excellent opportunity for them to learn good manners, virtues and enjoy their life. Although there are fewer facilities in the village, living in a good and happy environment is crucial for children's growth.
In the final analysis, although cities provide good facilities, and more opportunities for success, to bring up children, the countryside is the best place because of healthy foods, good environment, and love of grandparents
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...is the best place to bring up children. Although, there are positive sides to both views...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33793103448 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03588525583 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0306887662 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24994767837 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097046413141 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107507890952 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153154559 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125373784507 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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