Some people like to buy new phones, new desktop or other latest devices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the development of technologies, high-tech products, such as smart phones, computers and tablets are upgrading more frequently and they attract large amount of people to purchase them. Generally speaking, I believe that its advantages outweighs disadvantages.
On the one hand, someone may feel worried that people would keep replacing their electronic devices with the new ones, since they keep releasing the new generations. Therefore, anyone who wants to use the latest products has to keep making purchases. In addition, the prices of those high-tech equipment are also rising, which indicates that people fond of those products might spend more and more money on them. It would potentially increase their economic pressure. To sum up, it is unrealistic for those who live a lower-level life to buy the latest electronic products.
On the other hand, if some people are earning sufficient income or living a decent life, they have multiple reasons to buy those latest high-tech products. First of all, the most upgraded electronic products bring the best efficiency and convenience. They can run the latest software the most rapidly and smoothly with the best hardware. Apart from that, plenty of people who work with advanced technologies closely, such as designers, engineers and scientists, would like to keep upgrading their desktops or laptops for work purpose. Moreover, it should be supportive that people who can afford those electronic products buy the latest ones, because the companies which develop these products could earn more money and thus could devote more cost to continue designing the new products.
To conclude, it is becoming a trend that people like to purchase the high-tech electronic products. People who are economically insufficient should not pursue those latest products as it would generate pressure on them, while people who can afford them could buy them based on their requirement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 789, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to continue designing the new products. To conclude, it is becoming a trend that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, as to, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38613861386 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74109049473 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541254125413 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7181089032 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17899325406 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599900638482 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500160474699 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108711288466 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534224663362 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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