The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Obesity among people are growing at an alarming rate, thereby putting pressure on the healthcare systems to overcome the problem. Therefore, many people assert that the introduction of physical education in the syllabus of students will be the better option to deal with the issue. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the viewpoint as children must have knowledge about their fitness and consequences of obesity.
Physical education in the curriculum can induce mental and physical well-being of students. A compulsory subject perhaps trigger the minds of children to participate in various sports activities, which would eventually enhances their fitness levels. Regular practice of these games will boost their health as well as mental power. According to an article published in The Guardian, children, who actively participated in their school sports ranging from basketball, football, and hockey have higher levels of fitness compared to those school students who take physical education as an optional subject. Therefore, a basic physical education is required for children to keep themselves heathy.
A subject of physical education includes comprehensive details of exercises and diseases caused by ill-health. In other words, students can not only learn about exercises and their steps but also grasp the knowledge of diseases related to bad immunity and health. With this, they got to know the repercussions of obesity, which is caused by an unhealthy diet and lesser physical workout. Take, schools of Finland, for instance, the educational ministry have included a compulsory physical education subject in the syllabus as their students were getting ill due to weight gain. Hence, a fitness subject has given them knowledge about healthcare benefits.
In conclusion, I believe that inauguration of a physical education course in the school curriculum should be necessary as it will provide the basic understanding to children about fitness and impacts of obesity on their body. Nevertheless, they will get proper education of health and fitness from their tender age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54375 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85371879089 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1231517519 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.266666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198430704291 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733626475296 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548356988489 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132542917918 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696006909551 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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