SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT THE BEST WAY TO REDUCE CRIME IS TO GIVE LONGER PRISON SENTENCES. OTHERS, HOWEVER, BELIEVE THERE ARE BETTER ALTERNATIVE WAYS OF REDUCING CRIME.
DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
Perhaps crime has been considered one of the most crucial issues in this contemporary society. While some people are of the opinion that it is vital to give longer prison sentences to reduce crime rate, I am in favor of the fact that there are other measures to tackle this phenomenon. Therefore, the objective of this essay is to give possible reasons to prove my belief.
On the one hand, there are various views about why giving lengthy prison sentences plays an essential role in limiting crime. First of all, it is regarded as a deterrent to potential offenders in order to raise their awareness of the consequence they might suffer if they tend to commit illegal activities. For example, they may be able to end up their lives in jail, which will affect their future prospects. Another point worth mentioning is that this way is similar to a severe punishment so that prisoners have an opportunity to rehabilitate themselves so as to become useful citizens and avoid reoffending after being released from the prison.
On the other hand, as far as I am concerned, a number of other appropriate methods should be taken into account to deal with this situation. The first thing is that the government is advisable to take responsibilities for creating a wide range of suitable jobs for people with different levels of education. By doing this, everyone will be able to make ends meet in their own lives. This will be one of the promising factors contributing to the dramatic decline in the unemployment rate which is the root of social evils. In addition, new legislation needs to be issued to regulate the appearance of violent films and games that have a negative impact on the society since people have a tendency to mimic what they see in order to solve their personal conflicts with surrounding people.
In conclusion, it is a double-sided issue with opposite opinions. Nonetheless, I still hold my belief that finding other suitable solutions is more effective than introducing longer jail sentences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 557, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... opportunity to rehabilitate themselves so as to become useful citizens and avoid reoffe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79743262556 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604105571848 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.597875882 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182310748845 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599812060565 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929283034719 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113012733057 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958542432774 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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