With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In recent years, reading books on electronic devices such as mobile phones and computers has risen in popularity. Many people claim that this trend is the progressive approach while others see this as a negative development. This essay will highlight some of the benefits and drawbacks of this trend.
To commence with the positive, one significant advantage is the convenience of handling and reading e-books. Thousand of e-books can easily be stored in one mobile phone, which is no bigger than the size of your palm. For instance, people can carry the whole library wherever they go with a small mobile phone. Moreover, it is easily accessible from anywhere around the world since one can easily download e-books from the internet while staying at home. Besides its convenience, it is affordable. Many online websites provide free access to their material or charge minimal fees for a monthly or annual subscription.
On the other hand, e-books do have drawbacks. The most obvious disadvantage is that it is unhealthy. This is because watching a mobile or tablet screen for a prolonged period puts a strain on the reader’s eyes. To make matters worse, it can weaken eyesight if used for a longer period of time. In addition to it, mobile phones and tablets are not reliable because they are more prone to cyber-attacks and have high chances of losing the data. As a result, traditional books are way better than e-books for avid readers.
In conclusion, despite the benefits of e-books in terms of convenience and affordability, the drawbacks of weakening eyesight and reliability should also be taken into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09701492537 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81324477775 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9509810425 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.375 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264696688166 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825398692062 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851241370536 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154558939363 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107327043948 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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