Some feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
It is believed by some that an advertisement has positive impacts on individual people and organizations, others, however, has an opposing viewpoint. While, promotions have negative sides, I believe that both people and corporations can benefit from them.
People who argue against advertisements often relate it to the fact that companies may use it for their advantage to promote low quality goods or services. Consumers often are skeptical about whether they can trust promotional videos and if they show the real qualities of the products or exaggerated ones. Companies, on the other hand, spend a huge amount of money for such promotional videos or billboards by involving famous celebrities or sports people. However, not all promoted products are sold well, consequently it may seen as an expense. Thus, not all people get convinced about quality of the products from advertisements, which corporations spend million of dollars to create.
Nonetheless, there are more benefits for both people and companies. Firstly, people familiarize themselves with new products and services through various promotions, which enable them to try innovative products. By having many choices people can try products and choose ones that are best in the market instead of buying from only well-established corporations that often times do not promote their famous products. Thus, it creates competitive advantage among big corporations and the smaller ones. Moreover, new manufactures can also gain advantage with the help of various promotions. Advertisement is changing the business world as it enables newly created start-ups to sell their products.
In conclusion, I believe that people benefit from advertisments by discovering new products, and, companies can gain customers for the newly created products, although companies can advertise low quality products and loose money if their promoted products will not sold well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are often
...ow quality goods or services. Consumers often are skeptical about whether they can trust ...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...ional videos or billboards by involving famous celebrities or sports people. However, not all pro...
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Line 3, column 530, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
...ucts are sold well, consequently it may seen as an expense. Thus, not all people get...
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Line 3, column 661, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...dvertisements, which corporations spend million of dollars to create. Nonetheless,...
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Line 3, column 691, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ons spend million of dollars to create. Nonetheless, there are more benefits for...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'sell'
Suggestion: sell
...ney if their promoted products will not sold well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6095890411 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.040756491 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568493150685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.66993876 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111366430985 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442161762515 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430674059082 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813994554935 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461875087735 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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