Scientists have been waring for many years about protecting the environment and we must limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite warnings, many people do not do this. What are the reasons for that and how people can be encouraged to take an interest in protecting the environment?
Being warned from numerous years about saving the environment and people must use energy in limit in their daily life. Now, it is recommended that people do not preserve the environment. There are ample of causes and solution of this notion which I would justify in following paragraphs.
To commence with, there are plenty of reasons behind it. The lifestyle of people is supreme cause for this because nowadays, people have their own cars they use it in their routine life for going to their work which create lot of problems for environment. For example, last year, a survey was conducted by researchers in which they concluded that 80% energy resources was used by people in their everyday life. This, it put harmful effect on animals and human beings also. Apart from it, there are many factories in which they used harmful chemical resources which emit dangerous gases which increase the environment pollution. As a result, for this purpose, they use energy resources.
On the other hand, it has some solutions which can help to tackle with this issue. First and foremost point is that government ought to be implement strict rule and regulations about protecting environment because if they use too much energy than they should punish that person. Due to this, they stop to use unlimited energy. Moreover, law maker should organized some camps in which they can told the drawbacks of use more energy and they give knowledge to them about how people can save the environment by different efforts. As a consequence, people can be awarded from these solutions and started to save the energy resources.
In conclusion, people should endeavor these solutions to solve this notion owing to this, people can get triumph also impose some rules for it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...mful effect on animals and human beings also. Apart from it, there are many factorie...
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Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'tell'
Suggestion: tell
... organized some camps in which they can told the drawbacks of use more energy and th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, apart from, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98639455782 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48336592114 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554421768707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1336260971 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330114369385 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116334915681 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709397085905 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213703131405 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471579450303 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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